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The Ocean's Sun

Captures the splendor

The colors portray

Beauty of no equal measure

Gifted each day

 

Blazes across the skies

Reflected on waters below

Magnificence denies

Any lesser to know

 

Elegant demeanor

As she dips and fades

From whence pristines her

Till rise of next day...

 

c2009 vduna

 

 

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  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 10

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    Very lovely

    I used to live right near the ocean and even after all this time I still haven't captured all the moods of the sun over the ocean. Beauty is far too average a word to describe it. Love your work though.