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Grateful

I want you to be happy
so I enter your world
to care,respect and
fulfill your need

No barter nor conditions
in my undying love
no seeking nor expectations
a prize in return

I need you because I love you
no matter if we lock or not lock to each other
although we may find later
I am the wrong person

Thanks ,dearest one
Your true sweet or fake attention
more than enough to me!
Just un-lock it if our soul can not meet -

Again sweet smile in your sleep
don't forget to un-lock our bond
if this become a burden to you -
I still grateful for knowing thee



Author notes

Immature love says, "I love you because I need you,"
while mature love says: "I need you because I love you."

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  • FarFromFlawless
    January 28
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    very sweet...


    • Rain777
      January 28
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      true love need to be nourished daily with all our heart, soul and mind ...

      thanks for dropping by


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    January 12

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    Superb

    Aye, a fine write, indeed. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • Liquid memories
    January 12

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    Ahhhhh your soft words warm this heart i could
    feel the emotions of your love, sweetly stated.
    I would be grateful if I had such love
    expressed to me. Your authors notes add to the feelings you have shared.


    • Rain777
      January 12
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      try to be grateful in any condition - but maybe this time I need a pause

      thanks for your kind review

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