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Sweetest Angel

The sweetest angel of all
To have the honour of a gracious fall

From heaven she departed, earth-ward bound
Landing within these arms where love was found

The owner of these arms, has clipped her wings
Tying her down here, where she'll no-longer sing

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  • Echos in Silence
    January 15
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    this is really cool and makes ya think. i like it, thumbs up!


  • SpiceRack
    January 15

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    I'm not sure what to make of this one.. it is good, and I love the style and shortness of it, but I can't decide if I want it to be a good thing or a bad thing... Either way, good or bad, I rather like this one