my sun sets for you........... my moon rises for you
oh my honey bunny ...........my new year is for you
my stars shines for you...my all dreams are for you
oh my honey bunny .........my every year is for you
my breath comes for you...my heart beats for you...
oh my honey bunny .........i love you.........
my inspirations are for you....my thinkings are for you
oh my honey bunny.........my whole world is only for you
i have to say alot to you........my all words are for you
oh my honey bunny......so alas that on this valentine i am not with you
A contest entry
- Valentines day by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended January 26, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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very sweet...nice write
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Hmmmmmmm
Well it sure is moochie. lol Sweet and kinda comical in a sense.
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Well it is creative... I think. Not real sure what to think abot this one. But you did not read all the rules... I asked for only left align poems. This one isn't that way. Also, it doesn't flow very well. But you are testing the waters. And it is always good to try out new ways of writing. I suggest that you keep it up. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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Your feelings for your honey bunny are very strongly felt...I would like to see you make this in a poem form, and if you can, can you use spell check to get your words spelled...It is not good to use u for you....Want to help you win the contest...
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