I cared so much for you and you left me in the dust.
I showed you how I felt and still I got nothing.
What did I do how can I change because I don’t want to loose you.
You were the one to show me you cared.
My feelings were real were yours just a poly?
Am I a fool or a pawn in your game?
These tears are real see how I feel
If you just pretended just tell me now.
Sure it will hurt but hey who knows what can happen.
A contest entry
- Give ME EMOTION by Violent Glass.
700 points, ended January 29, 101 entries
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Comments
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This is a very emotional write and I can feel the pain of it... of course you know that. lol... I hope you win that contest...


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this is great
i've felt this way b4
good wite
thanx for entering


