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I cared so much for you and you left me in the dust.
I showed you how I felt and still I got nothing.
What did I do how can I change because I don’t want to loose you.
You were the one to show me you cared.
My feelings were real were yours just a poly?
Am I a fool or a pawn in your game?
These tears are real see how I feel
If you just pretended just tell me now.
Sure it will hurt but hey who knows what can happen.

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  • schwartzwald
    January 20

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    This is a very emotional write and I can feel the pain of it... of course you know that. lol... I hope you win that contest...


  • Violent Glass
    January 18
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    this is great
    i've felt this way b4
    good wite
    thanx for entering