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lead me to correct destiny

I am neither young
nor at middle age
and am slowly embracing
my sixties .

Whether to confine to modernity
or to switch over to  links of modesty
is still undecided
to say in a word I am at cross roads
finding no way to decide

oh! the almighty
assist me in traversing this doubtful path
and lead me to correct destiny

A contest entry

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  • Samplette gold member
    January 12

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    Crying out for guidance should be a daily experience for all of us. Beautifully written. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • RamblingRose
    January 10
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    Wow! and honest and beautiful plea for guidance from God...