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The Grove


A sanctuary of silence
where beauty breathes among trees,
each branch draped with a dream
that isn’t impossible to reach.

An enlighten pen speaks
unlocking a lifetime of memories,
the love between words and inspiration
never to be lost is etched for eternity.

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  • Draig aine gold member
    January 29
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    congratulations on the gold

    a well deserved win indeed


  • LionessK silver member
    January 29

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    This is absolutely gorgeous...
    Impressive. and everything else already stated below.
    Thank you for sharing your gift with us here.


    ~Kristy


  • greyhaime
    January 29

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    I love the last few lines of this!.. this is a wonderful poem, thanks so much for sharing this and writing it for the group.
    cheers


    Krystal


  • Tamaska Forsaken
    January 16
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    Gorgeous. I'm truly envious of how you can say so much with so little. Gah.


  • lindaburns gold member
    January 15

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    An enlighten pen speaks in a sanctuary of silence
    where beauty breathes among trees,
    unlocking a lifetime of memories,
    words never to be lost because they’re etched for eternity.
    Simple and expressive with definite insight. Good work.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    January 13

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    Superb

    I like how the outline of your poem can remind one of an old tree stump. Very well written, indeed. Thanks for sharing.

  • Draig aine gold member
    January 12

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    just wow

    An enlighten pen speaks
    unlocking a lifetime of memories,
    the love between words and inspiration
    never to be lost is etched for eternity.

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