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Sententia

Pulling, plucking, strumming, singing,
Strings of time just keep on bringing
All the things I keep on feeling
Flooding back into my brain.

Overwhelmed and overthinking,
I'm so glad to keep on living
In this world of art and meaning,
In this place that I call home.

I'm still searching, I'm still waiting
Calculating and creating,
I am writing and erasing
Paths and faces I have learned.

What I need now is a giving,
What I need is a believing,
All the things that I'm achieving,
In this world are not for naught.

I'm celebrating and elating,
Recreating and negating
All I've known and all I'm stating
'll always be a part of me.


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  • Kathraina silver member
    May 24

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    Really good job with this piece.
    Fantastic flow throughout, and I love the concept here
    Bravo


    ♥ Kate


  • worthlessmaggot
    January 11
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    i like your style, overall, i think you did a great job. props