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her chaos

 

She slammed diary secrets into medicine cabinets
and told herself, "Never again."
Awaken to the sound of regret thumping and calling all cars.
Is this time collecting for the last time?
Or do I have more footsteps I can take on walkways alone?

This is me struggling to keep my make-up and
not switch to super glue.
[maybe if he can't move, he won't leave]
After every portrait of a lying heart,
I run away with a Sharpie marker,
labeling what's mine.

My outcry is spoken through cardboard cut outs
and bright red yarn.
I'll wear my letter A when I'm good and ready.
And if you choose to fence me in,
I'll bring my crowbar and bad intentions.

 

 

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  • Draig aine gold member
    March 5

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    wow

    My outcry is spoken through cardboard cut outs
    and bright red yarn.
    I'll wear my letter A when I'm good and ready.
    And if you choose to fence me in,
    I'll bring my crowbar and bad intentions.


    did I say wow this is an awesome write

  • michaeline
    January 16

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    Good luck on the contests.This is really well written.Liked the way that you worded this.The title was a good choice.I liked the flow to this if it were longer I would say it read like a song.Great job and good luck to you.


  • penman gold member
    January 15
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    Wow.

    The end sure is a mind grabber. Great descriptions. Thank you so much for sharing.