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Hurt

What she said really bothers me
When did I become the enemy

What did I do to deserve this treatment
I feel like I'm lower than dirt

Did she really mean all those things
Or was she just in a bad mood

I can never tell
All I know is I'm hurt

What have I become
My sweetest friend
Everyone I know goes away
In the end
And you could have it all
My empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt

Where can I go
To make everyone happy

I'm afraid to die
Or I'd take myself out of the picture

I think that's what everyone wants
But I can't be sure

I cry tears of pain
But no one seems to notice

What have I become
My sweetest friend
Everyone I know goes away
In the end
And you could have it all
My empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt

I'll walk away today
And make myself disappear

You'll never see my face
After all the masks I wear

Why have I become like this
Look at yourself for that answer

I'll hide myself inside
You'll never know who I am

What have I become
My sweetest friend
Everyone I know goes away
In the end
And you could have it all
My empire of dirt
I will let you down
I will make you hurt

Why?

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  • the masked one
    January 21

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    I love the Man in Black, and this is brilliant. I can just picture it being sung, its so sad but really really good.
    ~Your Isha xoxo


  • Firequeen
    January 10

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    This is wonderful
    the flow is beautiful.
    People can be so cruel
    unfortunately the ones that hurt us the worst are the ones we love and care for.
    Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen
    Fire


  • RamblingRose
    January 10

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    Johnny Cash...I love that. Good poem. Yeah, it hurts like hell when friends get all mean and stuff...just ignore them ok, your pain is what they want, not you. Feel better soon. X X X X X