Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Goodbye Chief

She  found tomorrows yesterday, on the plain of broken dreams.
She Stood and looked towards the amber sky where motivation failed,
Though she smiled for the nothing she achieved,
and thought to herself 'well never knows best.'

She held out her hands in worship of the sky,
and bathed in the absolution of a town covered in ash.
A town where nothing interesting ever happens,
and wondered if a world beyond fog really exists.

“It doesn't” she proclaimed to the invisible stars.
“Existence is like a Sunday morning where you wake up and its raining”
“Or a panda with a mean face.”
“It's like hard day old bread that has lost its flavor.”

'Or at least thats what it's been like since I lost you chief'
She takes one last picture,
and waves goodbye to the forever she's never known.
“Now its time for sweet revenge” She says walking towards death's city.

Author notes

This is inspired by Mami from Fooly Cooly. I took some quotes from the show for you hardcore FLCL fans.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • MidnightxSun
    January 10
    Edit | Reply

    Love it

    One of the best I've read in a while

    Well done!


  • Nisk
    January 10

    Edit | Reply
    It's been a while since i saw that awesomely nuts anime, this piece reminded me of it, Mami and her disconnection from reality, confusion and void of motivation. Nicely done