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Contemplation In a Loud Whisper







I catch myself choking on the bones of my desires
and idiot writer trying to swallow dinosaur bones.
It might do the world justice that I choke right now

Deep the in secret recesses of my mind
I am not shocked that I find this appealing
for I have lurked in these dark shadows for too long.

I have tried to ring out a life just under fifty years
and there have been few pluses for this old aardvark
of a man who can not wring out an ant from under
these old logs of life rotting under the sun.







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  • luna-midnight gold member
    January 24

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    wow, this is deep, and so intresting, i really like this alot. good luck and thanks for entering
    Stephanie ♥


  • Olivias Violin
    January 10
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    This is powerful, with original metaphors.


  • geckogirl silver member
    January 10
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    this feeling is very familiar, the choking will subside soon....good luck