Dear diary,
The world around me seems like its
spinning out of place
sinking deeper within a constant ache of affliction
Everyday falling further within
disgrace.....
How my heart does fear
tommorow..
such uncertainty
how the tears of distant sorrows
begin to decend
not so calmly.
I Cry for those who own nothing,
but the anguish they express
each lost being within the worst distress
Those feeling nothing but pain and depression
their mind a constant aggression.
despair within each weary soul
a longing to become whole.
Wishing for love...
not able to understand its true meaning.
Hatred only intervening
Believeing in peace
Yet its too far within the distance
for such a tender cry to reach.
Oh how I wish this world would end
I long to pass it by
Enter into peace full bliss where
the angels dwell on high
where the sun is always shining
theres no tears within the eyes
for every cloud is silverlined
streets of gold unwind
the path before us is oh so near...
Enough to let earthly reality disappear
throughout eternity
our souls set free
to enter into such a place
Only by Gods abiding GRACE
A contest entry
- Dear Diary... by Aussie Gypsy.
800 points, ended January 23, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nicely done poet! I really love poems that reflect how the creator will end the sorrow we see! Good job with this~~
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this is is amazing
I wish I can say more. I just don't know how put it in words
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Very nice. I love you're style and how you laid it out on the page. Such wording is beyond my abilities, you definetly have a talent and great understanding of the world around you. Keep it up.
~Donna
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This is such a sad piece of writing, the world is full of tragedy but we can make a change before it's too late. Best to you in this contest
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Pure Excellence
Your thoughts of the world and the ones who live upon it has such profound depth .Yes their are those who needs and wants while others prey on them without thought .We who do care are few these days yet we are forever trying to bring love and peace where often we are pushed away but we must never give up . We are the guardeans of the lost and afraid we are their angels for them to see better days we are his hands from God above he gave us life to show his love
Hi there I am storiesuntold and a very good friend of Puppydog and we bless each other every day with our embraces and careing ways . I would so love to be your friend as well for you speak from the heart .
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ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW!!!!!!
This could be this earth's inspiration! So much heartache and pain around us which we see everyday, it seems a lost cause and most do not try to stop it. It is those who rise up above their hopelessness and still try are the ones who will succeed where others fail.
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