beneath the new moon
I reveal reality before you --
this is who I truly am.
Author notes
Picture prompt: http://natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-53893284
A contest entry
- OMG It's Another Quickie... by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended January 13, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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beautiful, and basking in the moon made you glow
Congrats on the HM
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I love your take on the prompt. its interesting and I really loved it. especially the last line.
good luck
kat
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Beuatiful simplicity
Existential goodness! In the darkness of the calm of the night, the beauty of your simple being is revealed. I'm probably going deeper than I should, but its how I interpret it. Great job!
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This is lovely. Revealing who we really are is a very difficult thing to do most of the time.
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Transparent write....Very powerful! Good luck in the contest!
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Powerful thoughts...to be able to strip bare and reveal all without hesitations!! Wonderful job and best wishes...
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Really nice take... not the obvious except as seen in your heart. Well done.
Ken
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Amazing job! Great take on the prompt!
♥ Kathraina
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