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Broken

drowning in depth's sorrow
of wafting sea flowers unscented
tearful trauma deluge

broken heart demise

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Credit to image: http://natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-53893284








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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 16

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    Brillant word choice and depth...sad how much love can cost us, yet sometimes it is worth the risk...great write.
    Congrat's on the trophy!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 13

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    outstanding take on the prompt. I love the last 2 lines the most. excellent poem

    good luck
    kat


  • Danna Hobart
    January 10
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    You created a fitting poem for the image.


  • jcat gold member
    January 10

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    Succumbing to death via a broken heart.....Not sure that love is worth such a risk but yet it is a risk we seem to take daily!! Incredible job and best wishes...


  • KayJay
    January 9

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    A wonderfully sad write... love your ending "broken heart demise"... Well done and best of luck.
    Ken


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 9

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    Bravo! Fantastic take on the prompt!!!

    ♥ Kathraina

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