Thought I was losing my head over you,
You warned me, I was...
How true!
A contest entry
- OMG It's Another Quickie... by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended January 13, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Only constructive critiques please
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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this is an excellent take on the prompt. wonderful imagery..
please come back & place the link in your AN.
good luck
kat
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adorably sweet....I loved it! Powerful little rhyme, caught me immediately....
Smile ♫
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Very nice. I like short tight rhymes that have meaning. It seems that so many poets on AP despise rhyme.
Great job.
Mike
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Laughs
Wow, I wasn't expecting a short one but how wonderfully delightful this was. Thanks for the read!
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Nothing like having someone tell you that you are falling in love when you are not even sure of the fact yourself.
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A clever and smile filled write. I really like your approach. Well done.
Ken
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Ooooh great improvement! Much better with the 15 words. So much said in so little! Bravo!
♥ Kathraina
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This is a great piece with just that hint of humour, however, I think the judge wanted 15 words as it stated in the rules. Yours is only 10
Love it though. Best to you in the contest
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