I tear the
mask I've worn
everyday
away
and
show my soul for all
_ forever
Author notes
http://natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-53893284
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A contest entry
- the biggest prewrite contest ever by serenity silvermoon.
900 points, ended January 18, 362 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OMG It's Another Quickie... by Sweet Impatience.
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Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
soo....whats your honest opinion?
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so much truth within this poem that you've written. excellent take on the prompt. this is something that I'm sure many can relate to.. I know for me, I've done this too.. excellent imagery
good luck
kat
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short, but very good i like the picture as well thanks for joining the contest
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We all wear masks at times. It takes a lot of courage to tear yours off and throw it away forever.
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Powerful clever write, of such honesty...Thought provoking....Excellently crafted! Good luck in the contest!
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Powerful clever write, of such honesty...Thought provoking....Excellently crafted! Good luck in the contest!
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Powerful clever write, of such honesty...Thought provoking....Excellently crafted! Good luck in the contest!
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Wish that we could all live by these words!! To live life freely of all masks would be the perfect existence!! Wonderful job and best wishes
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A brave write... full of strength and power. Excellent write. Best of luck.
Ken
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Nice. It fits the picture prompt nicely.
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oh I like this
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Sometimes this is what we need to do, get rid of the facade and show the real us. Best to you in the contest
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