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It's just a feeling

The silence
The dark
You'll be happy to know
You made your mark.

Can't see
Can't speak
Can't let it go
It's you I seek.

So... Am I going mad?


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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 14

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    your take on the prompt is a great one. I'm sure that many can relate to this piece a lot. I know I ask myself this once or maybe twice in a week.. ok lol more like once or twice on any given day..

    good luck
    kat


  • LovelyTraces
    January 11

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    this is really good. great take on the prompt, and it says a lot in a little. i think it's pretty darn spammy! :]


  • Firequeen
    January 10

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    ha i know ive asked myself this question a few times
    this is a great write
    Honest and true to yourself
    thats how it should be
    Thank you for sharing
    Fire


  • Danna Hobart
    January 10
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    So... Am I going mad?

    We all wonder this sometimes.


  • Jesann gold member
    January 9
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    A good take on the prompt.
    Great title for your write.
    Well done.

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