Hypocricy
Your lies at her soul, she
bled tears of pain
And now
can't see
Author notes
Prompt: Image
Image Credit: http://natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-53893284
A contest entry
- OMG It's Another Quickie... by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended January 13, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I absolutely love this poem that you've written. excellent take on the prompt. the last two lines in this piece are brilliant. the imagery is fantastic.
good luck
kat
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I love the last two lines!
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Oh, why do we give others so much control over our emotions?
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A dark write but you've captured raw emotion and feelings with your words... Well done.
Ken
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Hopefully she is blind to HIM! Great job!
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I like it
"Your lies at her soul" - implies clawing without saying so. Nice.
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Such emotion! Love what you did with this prompt! Great job! Bravo!
♥ Kathraina
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This left me with a really sad feeling, you can still create such beauty in sadness. Bravo to you sweetheart. Best to you in the contest
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