Revel in
spotless exposure
force pins in
weary eyes
anticipating truth to
flow liquid red. . .
Author notes
http://natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-53893284
there is a wealth of reality in this write, but I'll spare you the drama
A contest entry
- OMG It's Another Quickie... by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended January 13, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Yep, there she goes again. . .
Comments
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this is an incredible poem that you've written. the imagery is brilliant. I particularly like lines 3 and 4 the most.
excellent take on the prompt
good luck
kat
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deep..
and thought provoking piece here my friend..and that pic. is fantastic! all around like usual you did excellent lady.
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Yikes. This is a more shocking poem. Great job on this short one. Nice imagery. Best of luck in the contest.
Mike
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Oh, this is a very fluid write. Nice take from the picture.
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The scarlett mark of truth!!! An interesting an incredibly deep write!! Love it....Best wishes
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You spared us nothing... the emotions flow in your words... Bravo.
Ken
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Wow, fantastic job! Great take on the prompt! Bravo!
♥ Kathraina
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You sound like another that could have written pages on this prompt, but with such brevity you have done a brilliant job. Best to you in the contest
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oops. Have these too
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Go you!
Way to express.
This was great stuff.
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