Cold heart
slaughtered me
unquenchable was his
hunger for blood
he is still free today
Author notes
15 Words
Prompt: natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-
A contest entry
- OMG It's Another Quickie... by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended January 13, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is an incredible poem that you've written in just 15 words. the imagery, the emotions that can be felt throughout this piece were powerful and strong.
good luck
kat
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Too many criminals get away with murder over and over and over again. We see these tv shows where they catch the bad guy and lock him up in the course of an hour, but in real life, the police have a very poor percentage of solved cases.
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This is why I believe in an eye for an eye!! The system is so broken that the victims are punished more than the perp!! Wonderful job!!! Best wishes
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A murder mystery
How cool is that? Really, an enjoyable read.
Ken
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Seems as if Dracula just dropped in for a feeding. lol Love this take on the prompt.
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Ohhh hauntingly dark hun, you have chosen just the right words for maximum impact here. Sensational. Best to you in the contest
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