Shattered,
my tears flow,
nourishing the
seeds of rebirth.
From pain, beauty
blossoms again.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://natsuki-3.deviantart.com/art/The-Truth-53893284
15 words
renaissance ~ a renewal of life, vigor, interest
A contest entry
- OMG It's Another Quickie... by Sweet Impatience.
700 points, ended January 13, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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I love this poem.. to me it seems sad in the beginning, then in the end there is hope.. excellent imagery... fantastic take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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Amg. it is a beaut. Short and succinct and severly beautiful.
Congratulations. Though I dunno about "Shattered" I find that there are better words to describe this pain.
I love the title.
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Thank you for the kind comments and the applause... Much appreciated
Ken
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Beautiful work here
Very good on this write and you have said much in such a short piece here
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Excellent take on the prompt.
Love this.
"Beauty blossoms again" ...Beautiful.
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I love the circularness of the poem. From misery comes beauty. Nice.
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Oh!!!! This is so beautiful and so profoundly poetic!! Wonderful job with 15 little words!!! And the title was awesome!!
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Gorgeous take on the prompt!
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