Demons and devils
demonstrate valour
all other living beings
exhibit patience
Do or die
is the evil design
of the former
perform and succeed
is heartfelt sign
of the latter
Author notes
option-1
A contest entry
- 13/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended January 14, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
my
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I like your take on the prompt. the imagery is excellent.
good luck
kat
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An interesting poem and perspective.
Very well done.
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I can honestly say that I have never seen anything from this point of view before.
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I enjoyed this very much... nice imagery.
Ken
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I would be interested to know which picture this was for and the judge requested you put option number in the author notes too. Great poem though. Best to you in the contest
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