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to practice in life streams

Dried and blunt trunk
rose to  some height
looks like a demon
professing morals

Demons and devils
do speak more morals
and humans alone
put them to practice in life streams

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  • The Cube
    January 14
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    Short. Usually the first thing I notice in poems like this. In a way I think this could have kept on going. These 'practices' could be given some credit as to how they contribute to society, that way, the image could be given credit as to what it may well represent.