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The Pilgrim

Missing image
Searching
Through darkness
Stumbling

So many paths..
Lifetimes, it seems
In but one

Candlelit diffusion
Dreamlike illusion

Thoughts fleeting
Hearts journey
Seeking

A pilgrim
Questing in
Finding oneself


Author notes

Option 1
Picture Credit - http://asaenath.deviantart.com/art/In -Search-of -the-soul-51562202#

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  • Beret55 silver member
    March 24
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    Well done, and so true..


  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    March 20

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    Excellent

    Excellent this a wonderful poem and beautifully worded, i like how it flow a good job and a remarkable piece of work. Great talent. Rich amazing imagery There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one Alexander QQ…


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 6

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    Yes..this is what the life is and we can relate with the struggle you have painted through the poetic journey here..well done indeed..and thanks for sharing..


  • afroqban
    January 31

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    well deserved cup there. this piece demands attention, very clever and conversational while keeping its poetic tone. sweet!


  • morgana raven Greeters member
    January 24

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    I like the rhyming in this poem where used. The last stanza I like most, great take on the prompt, congrats on the honorable mention for this.
    Laura.


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 14

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    this is an outstanding poem. the second stanza is what hit me the hardest. the imagery is excellent.

    I counted and you are short by 2 words.

    good luck
    kat


  • Ken-Maverick
    January 13

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    Duuude!!! this is one awesome snippet of a poem you have here and the second stanza was just a knockout.
    All the best to you in the contest

    Ken


  • chilali
    January 11

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    Beautiful take on the picture. I truly loved this piece Nicely penned.

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 10

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    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    You took this picture and wrote such uplifting and touching words to describe it!'s SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!


  • Lanasaur
    January 10
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    wowowowowowowoowow

    amazing write deeply thought about


  • Danna Hobart
    January 10

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    Nice allusion to the quakers who came here trying to create Utopia the way you are looking for yourself.

  • Bob Fox
    January 9

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    Methink

    Poet i get the feeling that this has been me, as it seems I have always been on that journey. & again I search. Your words my inspiration.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    January 9

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    Wow, what a beautifully presented though process in finding one's self. Well done. Best to you in the contest


  • KayJay
    January 9
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    Beautifully done... such a great path to self discovery... Bravo!
    Ken

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