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[ The soul is a hollow shell ]

The soul is a hollow shell
Without you by my side
There is no pain, no need,
As pure as when
I haven't heard your voice
In 32.400 seconds
401, 402, 403, 404...
It is a hard thing
To be without the one
For whom your heart beats
To wallow and nearly drown
In the memories of that last look
That last syllable, that last breath
And feel as though you never want to wake
From the daydream you've wrapped yourself in
Cozy and warm
Like the arms of a lover
Long since gone

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  • Ez Writer silver member
    March 28
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    Eloquent !

    A lovely poem and daydream . A
    touch of melancholy from this
    dream of a love , long since gone .
    Great read !! Best wishes ! Friend Easy


  • Ez Writer silver member
    January 28

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    Beautifully written ! It would be hard to have
    to wake from this day dream .
    Great read ! Friend Easy


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 10

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    This is a very good write. You have alot of heartfelt emotion and some powerful words here.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**