Naked and hidden by shadows
she told of our future
all of the darkness
that would enter our lives
she gave me a token
her words were sincere yet,
haunting
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30 Words
Prompt: nodate.deviantart.com/art/Split-personality-
Option #3
A contest entry
- 13/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended January 14, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this had a haunting feeling to it for me. knowing that sometimes we can't always predict our futures.. and yes there is sometimes a bit of darkness throughout them, but sometimes there is more that can't always be seen. you did an outstanding job with this prompt. I really love your poem, it give a dark foreboding feeling..
good luck
kat
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Well, I hope that it was a pleasant future that she predicted. If not, I would ask for my money back.
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Great take on the prompt.
Excellent wording ...Love it.
Well done.
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Nice... I love the story you've told and how it brings life to the image... Well done.
Ken
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How hun, how incredibly different our interpretations of the prompt is. Wonderful and haunting indeed. Best to you in the contest
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