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My Brother

YOU GET ON MY NURVES
YOU MAKE ME SICK


YOU MAKE ME WANNA SLAP YOU
YOU MAKE ME WANNA LAUGH


YOU TELL ON ME ALL THE TIME
BUTI REALLY DONT BE MAD


YOU PROTECT ME FOR THE GOOD
YOU PROTECT ME FOR THE BAD


BUT WHEN THREATIN MY FRIENDS
THAT REALLY MAKES ME MAD


I WANNA SAY I HATEYOU BUT I REALLY REALLY DONT
I WANNA SAY I LOVE YOU BUT MY MOUTH REALLY WONT


BUT WHAT IM TRYING TO SAY FROM THIS POEM THAT IM TYPEN IS I REALLY REALLY HATE YOU BUT ITS REALLY THE OPPOSITE

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