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A Girl's Best Friend

Diamonds are a girl’s best friend
Or so the saying goes
As I watch emotional wealth
Sliding down your cheeks
Like the gemstones glittering
In the wan embarrassed smile
Of a pale tired yellow sun.
I wondered at the price it cost
For each diamond drop you made
And who it was that inspired
That crafted work upon your face.
I sigh and open my arms
As wide as the endless sky
And pull you to my chest
Absorbing the wealth you hide.

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  • MightyBoosh
    January 18
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    Oooh i like it, good luck in my contest!


  • geckogirl silver member
    January 11
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    a tuely inspirational write... well done...


  • StarEyes
    January 9

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    I used that line once...Diamonds are a girls best friend, or so they say...

    I used that in the first piece I wrote for my dad after he passed on. This is great!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love me friend

    Nyetta