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We Say

YOU SAY YOU LOVE ME
BUT YOU REALLY DONT CARE


I SAY  I LOVE YOU
BUT FELLINGS ARNT REALLY THERE.


YOU SAY YOULL HOLD ME WHEN UM COLD
I SAY ILL HOLD U BUT UM LIEING ANG NO ONE KNOWS


YOU SAY YOULL WIPE MY TEARS AWAY
BUT PAIN HURTS  AND THATS WHAT I SAY

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  • poetic ashleigh
    January 9

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    This is a funny poem I remember feeling thbhis way bout my ex boyfriend, after we stop feeling each other