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dedicate and devotedly too--------

I waited for you all along
with flower garland in hands
woven neatly by me
with so much of affection.

But you have not
knocked the doors
of my heart, mind
and soul too.

Today without fail
I much reach you
even at  some odd hours
definitely to seek your blessings
on this eve of my birth day

Please  allow me in ,my supreme lord!!
keep me not aloof from  showers of your grace
I am always 'yours forever'
dedicate and devotedly too

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 10

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    Amen..you are very keen and very much yearned to make your point prove and that is proved by HIS grace..very well thought work you did..well done