It has been tense at work
for weeks it seems
The kids make you want
to rip out every single hair
on top of your head
The teachers make you want
to scream your head off
because they take their stress out
on the people below them
The site director
acts like she came out of hell
Evaluation time has arrived
I pray I survive
I am so stressed with all
that must be done
I feel like choking someone
That would not be professional
Oh what a bummer
Author notes
LOL this is how I feel at work. We have hit evaluation time and everyone is on their toes.
Please tell me what you think
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the title alone made me want to giggle and then the picture startled me making me laugh out loud then the poem gave me mixed emotions; the panic rose so high I felt as though I was under evaluation
Bravo!
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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I really liked it up to the last two lines. I think the poem would be complete withouth them. They seem to take some of the wind out of it. I think it would be better to end on a strong note of anger than a weak one that almost contradicts the stress you built up through the rest of the poem.
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LoL very good write, good luck in the contest!
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Love your title!!! Had to read this!
I imagine we all have felt like this at times - just waiting for the wrong person to enter our view...lol
I much enjoyed this.
best wishes in your contest.
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lol.... i'm sure youll pass with flying colours!
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Oh those dreaded evals! This is great! You did a great job on this one! Something tells me that it will get better, sooner or later
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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