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Suicidal Note.

A single tear fell from my eye,
Not even once did you ask me why.
This is my suicidal note, just for you.
It's too late now, there's nothing you can do.
I've made up my mind Daddy; can't you see?
What all of your abuse and pain has left me to be?
I loved you Daddy, didn't you feel the same...
Do you feel it yet daddy? Do you feel the shame!
You've done away with me Daddy; what has been said, has been said.
There is no time left for me now; for as soon as you read this I'll be dead..

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  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    January 11

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    wow, this was really well written, great job. your writing will go far. keep up good work!

    ~bannazz{:


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 10

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Wowzers ~

    The dark pain yuo have expressed is raw and incredibly painful to read; I am so sorry you have gone through a rough childhood

    Stunning poem, I hope you do not commit suicide

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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