Ghosting,
Creeping,
Moaning,
Weeping,
Love of a mother,
Strength of a father,
Turn into ashes,
Crumble in hand.
Where is this love?
Why does it desert?
Absent without leave,
On this lonely battlefield of crushed dreams?
Where is this dream?
I followed it here,
Left a wake of light and joy where I had been.
Found that despair had filled its place
Leaking into my soul where I tried to patch the cracks
With clay and plaster and, finally, cement,
But nothing held.
And finally, when I found
That I held no more joy,
I threw my muddied heart against the wall,
Shattering it so that the shards flew back and hit my eyes,
And I became blind to my own pain.
And then I wept...
Author notes
http://www.loreleiweb.com/28/fant/00.jpg
cool pic, btw
thx, faded, it's a good contest
A contest entry
- Picture Contest (fantasy) by Faded Existence.
1000 points, ended January 25, 2009, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Mkay so i'm tired. pls dont judge me.
Comments
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*cries* That was sooo sad and sooo awesome. So I guess sad = awesome. Maybe...*handface*
I entered this contest too...dun dun dun...so did phe...double dun dun dun.
I know you'll do amazing in the contest because this is such an FREAKISHLY AMAZING poem.
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No! I did the smilie wrong! How do you do it? GRR! *handslap*
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NO!!!
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* facepalm *
w/o the spaces between the asterix
02U
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This was...
amazing!!!!
I loved it! Gah! Sorry I'm not in more of a deep commenting mood.. or a critical mood. But just know that if I were, i would have lots of great things to say about this! Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest!!!
-Faded
and thanks, I jsut wish more people would enter. So if you have any friends... encourage them to! please ha. -
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i will... HEY FRIENDS! ENTER THIS CONTEST IT IS SSSSSOOOOO COOOOOOLLLLLL!
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AWESOME POEM!IT WAS VERY DESCRIPTIVE AND AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From AJ
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thx, aj!
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Good poem! Nice descriptions! And very, very sad... But I like it anyways! Especially the last couple lines
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is it sad? i don't know where the h*** this came from... i wrote it but sort of it was JP... u no, my french muse who is incredibly hottt...
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yes... it was sad... wasn't it?
I should meet him some time
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u would like him. he is hottt. did i mention that alread? w/ever. JP is hottt hottt hotttttttttt!
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Hehe.
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"0" means love in tennis.
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My love too you... Oh! My love to you! I get it. I'm smart
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LILLI THIS IS REALLY GREAT!!! I really liked it. It was sooo amazingly descriptive and AWESOME!!!
Lots of
*KT*
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ur quick... i just posted this like 5 seconds ago
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thanks, btw manners, lilz, manners!
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ooooo, I'm goooooooooooood
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