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Crimson Heart



In a bleeding crimson heart
pale reflections upon the glass
on the bed of love lays a black rose
a mirror of ice, such a cold mass







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Heart
rose
bleeding
crimson
black
love
mirror
glass
ice
pale

Whatever you may wish, I am male just so there is no confussion.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    January 9
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    Wonderful my darling.. your rhyme is great.. Best wishes my love.

    Joann


    • Topaze gold member
      January 9
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      Thank you my little kitten, I love your beautiful mind.


  • serenity silvermoon
    January 9

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    i love this poem it was short but sweat and to the point what would you like to be in the family thank you for join the contest i hope you enjoyed it