Landing upon a dream filled with kisses,
as a butterfly swings his pretty wings.
May he slumber in peace as he wishes,
finding only the comfort heaven brings.
Light up the stars so you can see his soul,
finding shelter for yourself in his song.
When someone passes we have no control,
but love always remains forever strong.
Prayers so you know we all care dearly,
as a friend of yours speaks highly of you.
You're all special to her heart sincerely,
she speaks of how you're a friend tender true.
Sending my heart's sympathies with her own,
may you and yours find peace heaven's his home.
Author notes
Credit picture by: Aimee Hill My e-mail: weavertim@sbcglobal.net You may copy my poem and give it to the family as well.
A contest entry
- **For Melissa and Her Family** (Serious poets only!) by Aimee Hill.
2625 points, ended January 17, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh wow Tim-O-Fee!! This is beautiful beyond words!! I know Melissa and her family will like this one a bunch! I also like how you threw me into it
Your words are always the sweetness on the tongue... Your emotions weren't left out of this one, and I thank you.
I am happy that you entered..
Thank you for the permission...and thank you
for entering!
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well this is a very deep tender piece of poetry in the makin here bro and tis sad that God takes the one we want to stay with us forever but deep down they never go away in our heart and deep down they never go away in our memories either. anyw ays this is just a very beautifully penned lil write and im surte they will be forever grateful. take care as always and keep penninga way strong writes like this
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beautiful
I feel that they will love this, sorrow is always hard to express, but you penned it well...sorry for such a loss as well
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Wonderful poem Tim. Bravo!
Mariana
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very nice of you muhy very
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It's beautiful for them, bro
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