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At Four O'Clock




Sun projects giant leafy spider
shadow on mottled concrete

Through misty gray transparency;
northwest field hidden nearly

As wild orchids fade, dark
beings everywhere creeping

Tear in the screen
like a fish, leaping

Painted dolphin on the door,
sparkling, holding fast

I find and lose lamellas of myself;
while the path I once began,
perhaps it never existed.




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"It is necessary to write, if the days are not to slip emptily by." - Vita Sackville-West

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  • MightyBoosh
    January 11

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    I like this, and i too learnt a new word. Its been a good day.
    A very intellectual read, thank you
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  • Tqop
    January 10

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    Very beautiful and educational. As I looked up: lamellas, I smiled and said I learned something new.