Leaving my house and to the strip show I went
Getting my ass horny was my intent
Walking in the door with my dollar bills
Damn! Tonight I'm going to get my fill
Sitting down in front of the stage
Waiting to see which women they uncage
Three walked out with boots to their thighs
The fantasies in my head they untie
Drink in my hand
All three on stage they stand
Dropping to their knees
Diving face down into vaginas sea
Each others pussy they fucked
Tongue and fingers in their chink they stuck
Cumming and moaning in rhapsody
Between my legs I get tingly
So as I watched the trio of three
They made me cream
In my
Tight ass jeans
Author notes
I do not claim the picture used with this write as my own. Picture found on google images.
A quickie I did for contest
A contest entry
- Just dumping points, ya'll by thejollytinker.
1500 points, ended January 12, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OH !!!! WOW!
Yeah, mmmm..uhmm..this is blazing! whew, damn! l.o.l. good stuff lady!
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I should never read these at work.
. Truly tantalizing and erotic write.
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I'll say again. Girl i love your mind..
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Wow!!!! You are very talented and This is very well discriptive
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Great Write
I like your write not really into erotc poetry but this poem was well done I could see all the images clearly and you convay the message of your poem well through some of the rhyme you use so great work and keep writing.
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DAMN
Damn girl that one hot poem. It was a really great and steamy poem.
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as always ,you did yo thing .Good luck in the contest
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Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!!
-drops
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You go girly!!! Wowzers~ what a piece You have penned and the images that entice the Mind
Oy!! Yep You took this to a whole new level Beautiful
-walks into wall-
Excellent as always 
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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wow this is hot! love the pic too
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Nice and hot sweetie, as you always do so well.
Best wishes in the contest
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Sexy Has Been Brought Back!
Nice and hott read, such beautifully inscribed poetry, and this just makes ya want to dance and party all night long. I'm sure these three ladies did! Sizzle to the touch. Thanks for sharing, all the best within the contest! 
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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these bitches are delicious honey goodness
send them v i p to eat me and now! 
this was nice gurl good luck in the contest
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Tonight I'm going to get my fill...
Wow!
Codratulations!
Any room for me?
Three walked out with their boots to their thighs
The fantasies in my head they untie....
Vagina sea....
Must beworth seeing and worth drinking...
Each others pussy they fucked...
Wow...Wow!..Wow!
I'm feeling so jealous!
Wow!
How to havethem all...just possible...
Between my legs I get tingly...
So do I....
Come on baby...Let's doit together!
You're such a sweet chocolate, my love!
Galaxy2
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DAMN, THAT MAKE ME CREAM IN MY TIGHT ASS JEANS TOO, BABY!
Just like this juicy piece (times three - one HOT CHOCOLATE BABE for every X) did! A tasty piece to say the least with a very sexy background! GOOD LUCK in this contest with this - and now I'm off to fix a YUMMY cup of HOT CHOCOLATE with plenty of FRESH WHIPPED CREAM to quench my thirst from what these three fine ladies have dripping between there hot legs!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
Permission to stroke and choke me chicken to this NAUGHTY POEM and PICTURE, Honey?
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Very Hot!!! You go girl. Good luck in the contest.
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Oh yes
Its the type of fantasy I'd like
to experience with you. After which
we could explore some exotic avenue.
Something interesting that we'd never
forget. Thanks for the show. It was
sooooooooooooo delicious!!!
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Get em off, get em all off!
Definately hot and sticky.
Good write.
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I do not claim....
my response was unique....or claim to explain what went down on what cheek.
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WHEW!
That's quite a show you got to see there!
LOL! Great work here hon and I love the
pic that you found. Take care and good
luck to you!
Jeremy0826
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Make them take their boots off next time, girl!! Hate not to be able to see ankles- they spy on the soul, you know...
So fun and thank you for taking the time!! G
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Whew!
Oh my party gal. You sure riveted with this hot and steamy version. Great job. Best of luck in the contest.
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