Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Y

                                              Why?                Do?? 
                                              you                  do??
                                              all?                  you?
                                              do?                with
                                              ?a?                lack
                                                ?of            care
                                                  for?        how
                                                      ???it?? 
                                                      makes
                                                      me??
                                                      feel?
                                                        ? 



Words: K.Botka
1/9/09

Author notes

Another attempt at shape poetry! Let's see how this posts... I don't know how you shape poets do it! I paste from my Word Program here & it gets all messed up & then I'm going back & forth to try to align! It looks one way on the add page & another on the poem page! I have to leave this the way it is. I've got this thing about symmetry & I've got a massive headache now over this! Obsessive Compulsive you know.

Mt 22: 37 Yahshua said unto him, Thou shalt love Yah thy El with all thy heart, and with all thy soul, and with all thy mind.
38 This is the first and great commandment.
39 And the second is like unto it, Thou shalt love thy neighbour as thyself.
40 On these two commandments hang all the law and the prophets.

A contest entry

How'm I doin'?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • Darkwell
    January 20

    Edit | Reply
    it's a beautiful M,... i mean a Y i knew it was a Y i love love love the piece that fits into the Y too, just awesome and dont worry about editing to get shape, i edited aloft 50 times before i was happy with the shape Lovely piece


    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      January 21
      Edit | Reply

      Well....

      coming from the shape poet par excellance I'm feeling much better now! It's a unique Y don't you think? I admire your massive patience & skill at these Liz & thanks for the opp at some tries at this form! You are so sweet & I'll bet a real looker beneath that blue hair of yours! That's such a mysterious pix....very fetching! I'm not looking for brownie points here. I really mean it!


  • LovelyTraces
    January 15

    Edit | Reply
    haha!! yah, i know what you mean!! some of poems required exact spacing, and after i posted the poem, after making everything perfect, it went and got all messed up!! i feel your pain! but good job. this was also quite unique. and don't worry about it not being all intricate or detailed, it's great. a great message behind it. good job!

    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      January 16
      Edit | Reply

      Glad to know...

      I'm not the only one who experiences this problem. I was told when I asked a mod about this that AP is not shape poem friendly! That's to say the least! Thanks for reading & your encouragement. It means a lot!

1 - 5 of 5