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Dark Glitter

I see it
In your eye

Mischief's dark glitter

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  • Tqop
    February 10
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    Brilliant

    I like it.
    It's very beautiful and poetic.
    Stars in your eyes.
    Nicely done.


  • parenchma
    February 7
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    nice!


  • Lady Michaella
    January 13
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    oo this is excellent. so smart and well written.
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