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Unbearable

There was a young man of Droid
who grew a massive hemorrhoid
it was brutally unkind
when he void from behind
the torture drove him out of his mind.

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  • queen Moderators member
    January 12
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    this is cute


  • wattle silver member
    January 10
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    What a clever Poetess.

  • Thor-201
    January 10
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    Thank you for your entry.


  • queenie
    January 9

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    this is too funny! it has the correct style of a limerick and the humor they usually call for. this is very creative to say the lest. my best to you in the contest.