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Haiku


forgetting my poem
in the park, bird markings
give a bad review.





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  • MysteriousStrangerX
    January 16

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    an interesting write...never really read anything like it

    which is why its so good


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 9

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    lol

    what an honest review of those little critters, being in the city oh my tippy toe lol thank you for this entry...good luck
    MM


  • Rovingone gold member
    January 9

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    Very discreet view of the leavings on a park sidewalk and those pigeons are always so stuffy looking anyway, strutting about as they do.