Feeling your deep laugh
with my body against yours
joy’s undulation
two who have found each other
within echoes of the night.
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A contest entry
- Short Love Poems (PW'S OPEN ) by misticmoonlite.
650 points, ended January 12, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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a very nice write . . great feelings . . congrats on the gold !!
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This is sweet and well-crafted.
Congrats on the Gold.
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"Two have found each other
Within echoes of the night"
that line plays in the mind a hundred different meanings.
"Feeling your deep laugh
with my body against yours"
means close together.probably holding hands or feeling the body....lol
Nice write.
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i love this Jeff, very, very beautiful! --- congrats on the gold
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Wow I liked this you are the romatic one..
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romantic
within the depths of ones soul...this Tanka showed power in the words you posted..thank you for this entry, good luck
MM
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oh my thank you soooo much for the gold I am stunned and elated
sorry for the late thank you but seems i am supposed to work 24 hrs a day lol
Anyways I am humbled and congrats to all the winners.
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two have found each other
within echoes of the night
so beautifully expressed and such passion! That conjures up all sorts of illustrations in the mind.
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