Have you ever had a true friend,
one that is with you through thick and thin.
Someone who stands by your side,
strong and steady through lifes crazy ride.
Wipes away your crying tears,
and holds you close when your full of fear.
Holds you down in a tickle fight,
makes everything seem alright.
Gives you that reassuring smile,
worring inside all the while,
Always wanting them to be around,
the trust your love ever found.
Felling their gentle cares,
as they wisper your name under their breath.
Holding each other close,
getting that tingling feeling all the way down to your toes.
Thinking of them when they are away,
just tring to make it through another day.
All of your time you want to spend,
Being with a true friend...
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Written February 13th, 2004
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I love this is poem, you did a great job. I always love reading your poems, you are such a great writter. Keep up the great work, i can't wait to read some more.
Lovies Always,
Chea -
this is really pretty. it made me feel good reading it. well yea. bye.
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THIS IS REALLY GOOD. THIS REMINDS ME OF MY BEST FRIEND OF 10 YEARS. I DON'T KNOW WHAT I WOULD DO WITHOUT HER. SHE HAS HELPED ME THROUGH SO MUCH. SHE IS ALWAYS THERE TO LISTEN WHEN I NEED TO TALK ABOUT MY PROBLEMS. ANYWAYZ...YOU DID A GREAT JOB. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. KEEP WRITING.
CYNDI -
this reminds me of my one true love and my very best friend catalin. hes awesome, hes always been there for me.
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bravo
your entire poem is summed up perfectly in the last two lines 'All of your time you want to spend,
Being with a true friend...'
it's really something beautiful
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