sticks
strung together
simple limbs
reaching out to all of you
searching
a cool breeze
to blow me away
from here
until she appears
small fires in eyes
and the need to ablaze
something else
to take with her
middle finger
is at attention
a statement
to mankind
as i let her jump on
and we ash away
like love
we will leave
nothing behind
A contest entry
- Abstract Poetry #32 - WooDoo Master - by The Cube.
400 points, ended January 14, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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At first I thought we were about to do something where every stanza has their lines started with the same leter, but that ended quite quickly. Anyway, Though the lines were short the amount of stanzas and structure makes up for it. I like how each stana is, in a way, new way to explain the representation of the picture, but in the end they all run together as one. Great work.
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