1) Nightmares crawl
1) swirl whirl into all
2) causing screams in the night,
2) a scream of pain and fright
3) shadows lurk around the bend
3) for such a thing there is no end
4) Corazo and Shiro’s tomb
4) coarse a thousand tails of doom.
5) Ancient Evil of the clouds
5) watching human world go round
6) Gerinna told at long last
6) humans destiny of future and past.
7) Resilon of stormy sky
7) will send another till all people die
8) in the end it will be crushed or cursed
8) even more people are emursed
9) if not stopped a world will fall
9) like in the past, but once and for all
10) The find blood red sand (pronounced san)
10) is dust of Earth and dust of man
11) this is the end to be
11) that man will never ever see
12) for their world is ended
12) it cannot, yet again be mended.
13) Resilon is satisfied
13) with the way man has died
Author notes
Corazo, Shiro, Gerinna, and Resilon are gods this is a prophecy for Ancient Evil I book I am writing these names were made up by me same with the poem I just want to know what people think and I always or almost always put the rhyme by the poems if they rhyme yes i know its there please don't point it out
Yah DarknessofaSoul
A contest entry
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i have not been able to write for awhile so im rusty if its bad tell me
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10) The find blood red sand (pronounced san)
10) is dust of Earth and dust of man
11) this is the end to be
11) that man will never ever see
12) for their world is ended
12) it cannot, yet again be mended.
wow i hace read this before but never got the chance to really express how that last bit touched my dark heart. i loved this write and hope you keep up the good work
Blessed be
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thank you for joining the club.I would like you to write 3 poems a week, since you are a member of the intelligence club
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Very good...(and I hate to critize)
The find blood...shld be fine blood red sand (and we all get false rhyme) besides san in Latin is without....
I really like this write....and I am sure you can't tell...that I actually do
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for their world is ended
it cannot, yet again be mended
beautifully worded !
good luck with this unique talent !
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Bravo!!!
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wow
I want to read ur book now. I really liked it. Best of luck with ur book.
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when you finish i'd like to read your book
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writers block? it was intresting!
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thanks
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anytime!
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