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The Big Switch

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That big bully pushed me right out of my bed
And made me get in his little one instead
No one would believe me even if I did tell
But that Tom cat sure can scratch and yell
He left scratches all over my poor nose
Then paused to ask if I wanted more of those
To keep trouble down I’m staying right here
Trying to control this deep-rooted fear

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 16

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    This is too cute

    This looks just like my Banjoe the cat and toosweet my border collie except toosweet has onje white ear and one black but Banjoe does this to my dog sometimes hahaha


  • everyone1 gold member
    January 12

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    Funnnnnnnnnnnnnnny!


    Just loved this. I cats were like girls, (Thy 're just smarter) they'd rule, If dogs were boys, (Though I am one), they would just drool. Wonderful write dear heart.

    Thanks for sending it to me. Please do this any time. I love your work.

    ~ James ~


  • condor gold member
    January 10

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    That is Hilarious! I love this. Your sense of humour is something to behold, and I am still laughing while I am writing this. great poem with excellent flow and rhyme. poor dog suffering that fear! I had a big black cat that use to scare the life out of our big beautiful collie...What a sook! Thank you so much for entering and the best of luck.

  • ea silver member
    January 10

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    Oh, the brutality! That pic is hilarious - seems to be the perfect illustration for that old adage that cats rule, dogs drool.


  • Maxboy gold member
    January 10

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    Very nice take on the prompt and so funny.

    Best wishes in the contest


  • Kathraina silver member
    January 9

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    AWWW!!!!!!!!! Sooooo cute! Wonderful piece! Fantastic flow and rhyme, and love the concept! This is so funny and fits the picture PERFECTLY!!! Bravo!!!

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Firequeen
    January 9

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    LOL
    I loved this
    so cute
    It definitely gave me a giggle
    Thank you for the laugh
    Good luck to you
    Fire


  • maralisa silver member
    January 9

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    aw a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • ScottishPrincess silver member
    January 9

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    I really like this,way too cute indeed!
    I love this and it was such a pleasure to read
    Good luck in the contest! Regards,Hazel

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