A life is at stake for she may think no one loves her
But it's all a lie for someone does but never tells her
For he is to shy
And he is to week
And if he could he'd tell her
But his heart is to lost to love
For his heart has just healed over the last year
For his last had died but not a real death for she ended it all for he left her to death
For the death that consumed her was at her own chose
He never told her to cheat nor lie but it happened and it ended all there love and lives
What did you think
Comments
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very emotional, fantastic write
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wow..nice poem and full of emotions..
great write!
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Wow, I have been there before...
I know exactly what you mean.
This poem is very easy to connect too, and it find it very well worded.
Overall, this is one of my favorites of yours.
Your a very talented writer.
Keep Penning! -
i like your poem i think its good.
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