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dreaded moments

Don't ask
Don't ask
Please,
Leave me alone
I'm stuck in my sheets
And I can't stand you
Taking advantage
Of this opportunity
To get real close and
Blow air in my face
I always hate that
God, ya know,
I always really hate that
Wait a second
My legs are moving now
I'll just have to
Get back to you
On all those questions
[slash] accusations
This room's turned a
Too-perfect-shade of
Bright red
So, I'll be leaving now
I said,
I'm leaving now
We can have one of your
Heart-to-hearts another time

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hate when she comes in my room

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  • TheStupidLamb
    January 10, 2009
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    hmm..maybe i'll just have to sneak into your room instead. lol.


  • Firequeen
    January 9, 2009

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    well i don't know who it is you don't like coming into your room but i do know
    I loved this poem.
    It is straight and true and honest
    which i think makes the best poems.
    Thank you for sharing
    Fire


  • A n u k e t
    January 9, 2009
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    mom?