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no words

The silence is deafining,
And the lonlinyness that ramains is murder...
I'm bleeding!
I'm screaching!
But yet you keep that blood dripping dagger at hand

I beg and i plead,
I cry and I scream,
But still you stab,
And still you rip ,
And still you tear,
How can you just stand there and stare?!

Darkness looming at the edges
Once a blade brought relief.
Now all that is present is sorrow,
Anguish, pain
And grief

Pools of red all around.
No sight no hope reviled.
Your accusations reverbarate,
Bouncing in my head.
Singing and burnung my tattered edges!

My gaping holes and open wounds
Are the only thing you've left in your wake...

Author notes

The silence is deafining,
And the lonlinyness that ramains is murder...
I'm bleeding!
I'm screaching!
But yet you keep that blood dripping dagger at hand

I beg and i plead,
I cry and I scream,
But still you stab,
And still you rip ,
And still you tear,
How can you just stand there and stare?!

Darkness looming at the edges
Once a blade brought relief.
Now all that is present is sorrow,
Anguish, pain
And grief

Pools of red all around.
No sight no hope reviled.
Your accusations reverbarate,
Bouncing in my head.
Singing and burnung my tattered edges!

My gaping holes and open wounds
Are the only thing you've left in your wake...

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